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Creating Better Emails Faster With Repurposed Content

Tuesday, December 11th, 2012

I give a lot of advice on how to write better emails, but the word I really should use is create. The endgame of your email is to create a message that provokes a desired action – a website visit, conference registration, membership renewal, subscription or some other outcome that moves your business forward. Part of the reason that email works well is that the channel itself has your audience’s engagement. Your subscribers are in their inboxes all day long anyway, so placing the right message in front of them drives results.

But nothing says that the contents of that message have to exist solely within the inbox. Sometimes crafting some copy expressly for email does work and is what your audience expects. Other times, however, repurposing content from other channels not only saves time, but works just as well or better.

Here are a few places to source content for your next email:

1. The landing page: Ever write the copy for an email designed to send people to a pre-existing landing page, and find it’s hard to create something that describes what you’re offering as well as the landing page, but is not actually the same copy as the landing page? You can stop doing that. It’s OK to use the same copy that is already on the landing page (particularly if you know that the landing page converts). Yes, you run the risk of people reading the same thing in the email and then on the landing page if they click through, but if they did click they are interested in what you’ve written. You can also limit your repurposing to the segments of the copy that have the greatest impact. Think of a 15-second trailer to this week’s Big Bang Theory. It previews all the good bits so you’re actively looking for them when you watch the show, and not annoyed that you saw that part already.

2. Conference agenda: I have long believed that the most persuasive content around any well-programmed conference is not what is on the conference homepage that positions and describes the show overall, but the actual nitty gritty of what is going to be discussed on stage. In my own conference marketing emails I have relied heavily on agenda content and found that drives the highest engagement and does a superb job pre-qualifying prospects so that their email clicks are more likely to convert to registrations. This begs the question of whether you are putting enough energy into your agenda writing. If you are, try co-opting some of it in emails. If you are not, put energy there and you can take advantage of it on your conference site and in the inbox as well.

3. Your blog: A lot of companies put more resources into creating content for their blog than their social and email channels combined. So why not share it with your subscribers proactively, instead of waiting them to come and find it? Incorporate blog titles and abstracts into your other emails (like newsletters or conference promotions) and you may be surprised at how many clicks they pull. Or try out our RSStoEmail 1 pager and turn your blog into an email engine, sending messages out automatically based on whatever schedule you choose.

4. Social channels: Last week’s White Card was about some sources of email content that are not copy at all. Try working in images, photos, videos, slide shows, charts and other graphics that perform well on Facebook, LinkedIn, Instagram, YouTube or Twitter.

Remember that when driving your registrations and memberships, no bonus points are awarded for email channel purity. Focus first on the action you want your subscribers to take, then find, repurpose or create the content that will best get the job done.

5 Subject Lines That Defy the Delete Button

Tuesday, October 23rd, 2012

The biggest threat to your email program today is not evolving deliverability determinants, the rise of social media or even your competitors’ email programs. No, the one thing that drags your email program down more than any other obstacle is the Delete button. Smaller than a quarter yet more powerful than the largest opt-in list on the planet, the Delete button shuts down your message before it even gets started, squandering all the work you put into copywriting, design, multi-platform optimization, segmenting and targeting.

Defying the Delete button begins with exceptional subject lines. Here are 5 ways to write subject lines that help your messages make a strong first impression so that they give themselves the chance to continue the conversation:

Short: One way a subject line loses its audience is when it takes too long to grok. A short subject line is not a guarantee for success, but at least you know that the whole thing will be read – and quickly. Short subject lines also stand out in the inbox because of all the white space that follows them, bordered above and below by so many words in longer subject lines. The Obama campaign has received a lot of press for its email program, characterized by short subject lines like “Dinner?”, “Hey,” “Hey again” and “So.”

Telegraphic: Some subscribers respond well to a subject line that tells them exactly what offer lies inside the message. In theory, a subject line like “Special Offer You Won’t Want to Miss!” could pull well since your audience needs to open the message to find out what the offer is. But so many marketers (and spammers) have abused that subject line tactic that most subscribers have become inured to it. Better to tell them exactly what is inside so that they are reading the message not to discover the offer, but to act on it. An example I received just yesterday is from the Washington Area Bicycling Association (WABA) which reads, “This Week Only – Save on Your WABA Membership”.

Personally Promising: Highly targeted messages convert better, so if you send them make sure you alert your subscribers in the subject line. For example, if you are offering last year’s conference attendees $100 off this year’s conference, use a subject line that indicates as much: “Annual 2011 Attendee: Here Is Your $100 Alumni Discount for Annual 2012″. A subject line that conveys the offer and the reason for it is a more sophisticated (and effective) form of personalization than simply inserting your subscriber’s first name in the subject line and calling it personalization.

Colloquial: Let’s face it – wading through dozens of messages in the inbox every day is a drag. But you can brighten up the task with a subject line that’s unexpectedly colloquial and even friendly. Outside Magazine sends its subscribers renewal notices by email with the subject line, “Dude, it’s time to renew your subscription!” It’s casual in tone, but it’s also clearly a commercial message. It arrests attention while at the same time moving recipients closer to action.

Disarming: With so much email and so many subject lines designed to trick people into opening, it is no wonder our subscribers have their guards up when triaging the inbox. A disarming subject line can break through because it demonstrates some empathy with the subscriber. You know what they are going through just trying to empty out the inbox, a sentiment that gives your brand an added opportunity to resonate. An example I received recently was from Netflix, who overcharged me for a service I did not request and was emailing to notify me they had refunded my account. The subject line: “Credit where credit is due.” Clever and disarming, not only did this subject line ensure this message was opened and read, but it also helped position Netflix as a company I’m happy to do business with. Subscribers – very much like normal people – respond well to humor and entertainment.

What all of these tactics have in common is that they do not rely on tricks or gimmicks to compel an open. Rather, they all respect your subscribers’ time, show some empathy and communicate candidly and clearly. Even when they are unsuccessful at driving opens, they at least make a positive brand impression which can help lift the open rate of your next message, whatever subject line it may have.

 

Emailioriation Monday, 7-16-12: Find Your Fold

Monday, July 16th, 2012

You have seen email advice articles I’m sure that advise marketers to make sure that the most important content within a message is “above the fold.” If the call to action or key content element is visible as soon as someone opens the email, the assumption is that the message has its best chance of succeeding.

But there is an assumption inherent in that piece of advice that bears challenging – that being that the space “above the fold” is where the greatest engagement is driven. This may not be true. The kernel of the recommendation then is to place your most engaging content wherever in your email drives the most engagement. It may be above the fold, or it may just as likely be in a sidebar, in pre-header text, the middle of the third paragraph or even in a postscript.

To figure out where your engagement hotspots are, use Click View tracking to see which sections of each message capture clicks, and then experiment with different content types in each of these sections. You may find your fold is not where you expected at all.

Each week on “Emailioration Monday”  we spotlight a single tactic you can implement this week in order to improve your email marketing. Share tips of your own on Twitter at #Emailioration, and see the full collection of Emailioration tips here.

3 Ways to Tell if Your Email Copy Works

Thursday, May 24th, 2012

In order for your email program to be effective, it needs to fire on all cylinders: deliverability, targeting, relevance and creative. If any of those don’t work well, your email’s results will also sputter. For example, the most cleverly crafted offer can only persuade the owners of the inboxes it reaches. Similarly, there is little benefit to 100% deliverability to an audience that simply does not want what you’re selling.

Today I’m going to focus on creative, or rather, one aspect of creative – copy. You can find plenty of recommendations out there on the interwebs for how to write strong, scintillating and even irresistible email copy, but with so many aspects to your email program it makes sense to identify the areas that are most in need of improvement and work on those first. Your copy may be fine – even great – in which case you should work on tuning up the cylinders that aren’t running as smoothly.

Here are some ways to figure out if your email copy is driving your email program forward, or riding the brakes:

Click-to-Open Rate: Your click rate is the number of Clicks on links in your messages divided by the number of people to whom the message was Delivered (not sent). It is a useful metric for your message’s macro-performance, though it tells an incomplete story on how effective your copy is. The reason is that the only people who can click on your message are those who read it. Many of those to whom it was delivered – and who therefore figure into the message’s click rate – do not read it. To better measure the effectiveness of your creative – and in particular your copy – calculate your click-to-open rate by dividing the number of Clicks into your total number of Opens instead.

For example, let’s say on Week 1 you have 10,000 messages delivered, an open rate of 25% (or 2500 people) and 500 clicks. Your click rate is 500/10,000, or 5%. Your click-to-open rate is 500 clicks divided by your 2500 opens, or 20%. That is, 20% of the people who read your email were moved enough by your copy to actually click on a link. (We’re assuming that “opened” is the same as “read” which is not entirely true, but necessary for any sort of insight from metrics.) Is a 20% click-to-open rate good? Like any metric, it depends – principally on context. How well does it stack up to the following week?

On Week 2 you again deliver 10,000 messages but your subject line bombs and you only get an open rate of 15% (1500 people). Your clicks are down also, to 400. This gives you a click rate of 4%. But your click-to-open is 400/1500, or 27% – 7 points higher than Week 1. So even though your click rate was lower on Week 2, your higher click-to-open rate suggests that your copy did a better job moving your readers to action. If you hadn’t chundered the subject line, you would have had even more readers taking advantage of your expertly-crafted prose.

Click-view Tracking: On every Track Message page for email you will see in the right hand sidebar a thumbnail image of the message. Click on it to open Click-view Tracking, a full size version of the message with tags on every link indicating the number of clicks each link received. It works as a sort of heat map, showing where in the message people clicked, and giving you some insight into the blocks or lines of copy that were the most effective.

In addition to showing you the sections of copy that work best, seeing how your clicks are distributed across the message is very useful. If you have a sidebar and many clicks are there instead of the body copy, it could mean your body copy is either not particularly interesting, or that you have a design problem that pushes your readers’ eyes away from the section you want to hold their attention. If you see a lot of clicks at the bottom of your message, chalk one up in the win column. This means your copy was interesting enough to hold their attention all the way through the message.

Replies: The sad irony about email is that despite its billing as a 1-to-1 communications channel, marketers have done a superb job conditioning subscribers to regard it as the do-not-reply channel, regardless of what email address is in the sender field. So when your messages actually do get a direct reply from subscribers, it is usually an indication that they have been extraordinarily engaged by the copy. This clue is more anecdotal than the other two listed here, owing to the statistically insignificant number of replies. To change that, add a line in your footer or even a PS that reads, “If you have any questions or comments, visit our Contact us page here or simply reply to this email – we’re listening.” By telling your subscribers explicitly that email is NOT a do-not-reply channel for you, you’re inviting them to provide the sort of feedback that can dramatically improve first your perspective and then your copy.

Emailioration Monday, 5-14-12: Cast Aside Email Myths and try “Free” In the Subject Line

Monday, May 14th, 2012

Despite increased and even clinical understanding of what affects deliverability, it is still easy to remain a little superstitious about it, allowing old myths to persist unchallenged. Whether or not it was  ever true that certain words or phrases would trip a spam trigger and automatically result in emails not getting through, some myths about taboo subject line and body copy inclusions exist – many of which are ripe for debunking.

Deliverability is based on a number of factors, and while certain words or phrases can increase a message’s spam score, no single word automatically sends your message straight to the junk folder. I have seen many subject lines deliberately avoid the word “Free” when it was obviously the most appropriate choice. For example:

  • Complimentary Gift with your $100 Purchase!
  • Register 3, Receive 100% Discount on 4th Person
  • We Will Pay For Shipping, This Week Only

All of those would be tighter, more readable and effective if they used “Free”:

  • Free Gift with your $100 Purchase!
  • Register 3, Get the 4th Free
  • Free Shipping, This Week Only

When something is free, don’t be afraid to try “Free” in your subject line. If the word does lift a spam score, it is only one of many criteria by which your overall score is determined, and likely not to be the tipping point. Most legitimate emailers will see no perceptible decrease in deliverability in using the word, and may actually see an increase in sender reputation since the word is effective enough to boost engagement metrics. So cast aside your email myths from yesteryear and write subject lines that say what you mean.

Each week on “Emailioration Monday”  we spotlight a single tactic you can implement this week in order to improve your email marketing. Share tips of your own on Twitter at #Emailioration, and see the full collection of Emailioration tips here.

Emailioration Monday, 4-16-12: Ask For Less

Monday, April 16th, 2012

Many marketers use their emails as direct response vehicles, designed to drive conference or webinar registrations, sell reports or renew memberships. But the inbox is not where the transaction takes place; that usually happens on the website, where the “Register” or “Buy Now” or “Renew Here” buttons are accompanied by pages full of complementary content, designed to merchandise the product sold and remove all the barriers to the desired transaction.

So really, we’re not trying to sell with our emails – we’re only trying to encourage our audience to click through them to our websites, which are better equipped with content and functionality to close the sale. Instead of including a hard sell within our email copy, like “Register now!” or “Buy here,” try instead asking your readers to take the smaller step they need to follow anyway in order to complete the purchase. “Learn more” or “Preview Report here” or some other call to action that doesn’t require them to get out their credit cards may be more effective at bringing them to the page that will seal the deal.

Ultimately, your email’s job in direct response is to pre-qualify prospects and put them in a position to buy. Aligning your copy with these objectives recruits more people to your sales funnel, and lets email and your website each perform the jobs they which best suit them.

Each week on “Emailioration Monday”  we spotlight a single tactic you can implement this week in order to improve your email marketing. Share tips of your own on Twitter at #Emailioration, and see the full collection of Emailioration tips here.

Emailioration Monday, 3-26-12: Take 25% off – of your Copy

Monday, March 26th, 2012

Want to arrest your audience’s attention without resorting to fire sale pricing? Try taking a different 25% off – of your copy length. Once you’ve written your email as succinctly and clearly as you can, run a word count and then multiply that number by .75. That’s your new word count limit. Rewrite your copy until it fits into the new limit, without giving up any of the clarity and focus.

You may find, in fact, that the shorter length gives your message even more clarity and focus. Without length limits, emails suffer from scope creep and message dilution. Enforcing a word limit that is 25% less than what you came up with the first time around compels you to examine your objective closely, and find the quickest route to achieving it.

Remember, your audience may love hearing from you, but they may also be lending their attention to a hundred other senders, 200 Facebook fans and 150 Twitter feeds. The best way to take advantage of the attention they extend you is to respect and conserve it.

Each week on “Emailioration Monday”  we spotlight a single tactic you can implement this week in order to improve your email marketing. Share tips of your own on Twitter at #Emailioration, and see the full collection of Emailioration tips here.

Emailioration Monday, 3-5-12: Edit More, Write Less

Monday, March 5th, 2012

Lester Wunderman, the founder of direct marketing, remarked that the right length for any direct response communication is as long as it can be and still hold the reader’s attention. I think the same is true, but the window of attention has narrowed considerably. To many of your subscribers, 140 characters now constitute a complete paragraph. Compounding the challenge for email marketers is an increase of inbox clutter as well as multiple brands and channels vying constantly for a limited supply of attention.

So be brief. Start with a point for your message and stick to it, vigilantly. Your subscribers – and your metrics – will thank you.

Each week on “Emailioration Monday”  we spotlight a single tactic you can implement this week in order to improve your email marketing. Share tips of your own on Twitter at #Emailioration, and see the full collection of Emailioration tips here.